Feedback : I liked the writing for not attracting much attention to itself. That would have spoiled the simple story. There is craft here, but not for the reader to discover.

One only wishes that such a fine writer could deal with a stronger theme, esp as we are dealing with a writer who is also a psychologist. Maybe next time.
Title: ACQUIRED MAGIC by Anjali Bhatia
Link : http://openroadreview.com/acquired-magic-by-anjali-bhatia/
Date : 16/05/2013

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Shanti Perez
Shanti Perez received her M.F.A. and Post-Masters Certificate in the Teaching of Writing from Eastern Washington University. She is currently fiction editor at Open Road Review and was an assistant editor for Willow Springs. Her work has been published in PANK Magazine, Denver Syntax and RiverLit Magazine, to name a few. She is twice champion of The Pacific Northwest Inlander’s 101-Word Flash Fiction Contest.