Feedback : As for the story itself, its failure to be either realistic or allegorical is striking. Absolutely nothing interesting happens. And the sexual event at the end is more like an inevitable ending of things once the characters have reached teenage. Very disappointed – this story could have done better with a couple of more months of work.
Title: Edge of the Village by Jawahara Saidullah
Link : http://openroadreview.com/edge-of-the-village-by-jawahara-saidullah/
Date : 16/05/2013

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Shanti Perez
Shanti Perez received her M.F.A. and Post-Masters Certificate in the Teaching of Writing from Eastern Washington University. She is currently fiction editor at Open Road Review and was an assistant editor for Willow Springs. Her work has been published in PANK Magazine, Denver Syntax and RiverLit Magazine, to name a few. She is twice champion of The Pacific Northwest Inlander’s 101-Word Flash Fiction Contest.